Metacognitive blog: And Then There Were None

     I changed my draft by fixing my spelling errors and adding on to my rough draft. I added in a whole page of information in my draft about what Mr. Wargrave would have done in the cheating situation. I think the peer review checklist was the best way of support for me. I think it's good to have someone in your class who is doing the same thing as you review your essay. It's different because if I shared it with my mom she has no idea what I'm writing about and really all she can check is spelling and punctuation errors. What will help me improve my writing is just writing more of these essays and just doing more writing will definitely improve my writing by the end of the year. One goal for me as a writer is to write better information and writing better/longer paragraphs.